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Line and Copy Editing services for finished manuscripts

Our line editing services tighten every sentence for rhythm, clarity and voice, and our copy editing makes the whole manuscript correct and consistent, so your book reads like it came from a careful publisher.

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Line and Copy Editing: Line and Copy Editing, services for finished manuscripts
Overview

Sentence-level editing that keeps your voice and fixes the rest

Once the story or argument is in place, the work moves down to the sentence. That is where readers decide whether a book feels professional. A line edit asks whether each sentence is doing its job. A copy edit asks whether each sentence is correct and matches every other sentence in the book.

We offer the two as one service because most manuscripts need some of both, and the right mix depends on the draft in front of us. A clean, confident draft might need a light line pass and a full copy edit. A first-time author's book might need a heavy line edit before copy editing makes sense. Our book editing team reads a sample before recommending either.

If your manuscript still has structural problems, such as a sagging middle, a missing chapter or a muddled argument, start with developmental editing instead. Polishing sentences that may be cut later wastes your money. After the line and copy edit, a separate proofreading pass catches what slips in during formatting.

Every edit comes back in Microsoft Word with tracked changes, margin queries and a style sheet you keep. You accept or reject each change. Nothing is decided for you, and you keep 100% of the rights to your words.

Pricing works the same way as everything else we do: a free sample edit, then a fixed quote after a short consultation. No per-hour surprises and no upsell halfway through.

Author guide

Line editing vs copy editing: what each does and when you need it

Editors use these terms loosely, and authors often pay for the wrong one. Here is how we define each pass, what it changes on the page and how to decide what your manuscript needs.

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What a line edit changes

A line edit works paragraph by paragraph. The editor reads for flow and asks why a sentence feels flat, why a paragraph drags or why a scene loses tension halfway down the page. The fixes are about craft: tighter phrasing, stronger verbs, varied sentence length, cleaner transitions.

Typical changes include cutting filler words, breaking up a run of sentences that all start the same way and trimming a paragraph that says the same thing twice. In fiction, a line editor watches dialogue tags, point of view slips and over-explained emotion. In nonfiction, the focus shifts to clear explanations and paragraphs that build toward a point.

A good line edit should sound like you on a sharp day. The editor suggests rewrites, but the goal is to remove what stands between your voice and the reader, not to replace that voice with the editor's own. The Editorial Freelancers Association describes line editing in similar terms: improving wording and style at the sentence and paragraph level.

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What a copy edit catches

Copy editing is about correctness and consistency. The copy editor fixes grammar, spelling, punctuation, usage and capitalization, and checks that the same thing is handled the same way on page 12 and page 312.

That consistency work is bigger than most authors expect. Is it OK or okay? Do numbers under 100 get spelled out? Does the sheriff's truck stay a Ford, and does Thursday stay a Thursday? Is a term hyphenated in chapter two and closed up in chapter nine? A copy editor tracks hundreds of these choices and settles each one.

In nonfiction, the copy editor also checks cross-references, headings, lists, figure callouts and the format of notes and bibliography entries. They flag facts that look wrong, such as a date that clashes with an earlier chapter, though detailed fact-checking is a separate task you may want for a history or technical book. The general history of the craft is covered well in the copy editing entry on Wikipedia.

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Do you need one, the other or both?

Book editing runs from the big picture down: developmental editing first, then line editing, then copy editing, then proofreading after layout. Skipping ahead rarely saves money, because changes at one level undo work at the next. Our guide to the types of editing walks through each stage.

You probably need a line edit if beta readers say the book is slow but cannot point to why, if your sentences feel wordy when you read them aloud, or if this is your first book. You probably need only a copy edit if a previous editor already worked on style, or if you write clean, plain prose and mainly want errors and inconsistencies fixed.

Many of our clients choose a combined pass, where one editor handles style and correctness in the same read. It costs less than two separate rounds and works well for drafts that are already in decent shape. For heavier drafts, we recommend two passes, so the copy editor works on sentences that will not change again.

Not sure where your draft stands? A manuscript critique or our free manuscript review will tell you honestly whether you are ready for sentence-level work.

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The style sheet: your book's rulebook

Every copy edit we do produces a style sheet. It is a short document listing the decisions made for your book: spellings, hyphenation, capitalization, number style, treatment of foreign words, invented names and any departures from standard rules that you chose on purpose.

For fiction, the style sheet also lists characters, their ages and eye colors, places, timeline anchors and recurring terms. For a series, it becomes the reference that keeps book three consistent with book one.

The style sheet goes to your proofreader and your formatter, and it stays with you. If you later produce an audiobook, a translation or a second edition, everyone works from the same rulebook.

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Chicago, Merriam-Webster and house rules

Most American trade books follow The Chicago Manual of Style, now in its 18th edition, published in 2024. Chicago covers punctuation, numbers, capitalization, quotations, notes and hundreds of other details. Unless you tell us otherwise, our copy editors use the 18th edition.

Chicago points to Merriam-Webster as its dictionary, so that is where we settle spelling questions, such as whether a compound word is open, closed or hyphenated. When Merriam-Webster offers two spellings, we usually take the first and record the choice.

Rules can bend for good reasons. A thriller writer may want looser punctuation in dialogue. A field manual may need numerals everywhere for quick reading. We note those exceptions on the style sheet so they read as deliberate rather than careless. Academic and technical authors who must follow APA, MLA or a publisher's house guide can request that instead.

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How we work in tracked changes

You receive two files: a marked-up manuscript with every change visible in Word's Track Changes, and a clean copy with all changes accepted so you can read the book the way a reader will.

Small, obvious fixes like a missing comma or a typo are simply made. Anything that touches meaning, voice or fact gets a margin comment instead. Our comments explain the reason, for example noting that a character was introduced under a different name in chapter four, so you can decide quickly.

You can reject any change. If you push back on a suggestion, that is part of the process, not a problem. After you review, we answer follow-up questions and check any passages you rewrote. Google Docs users can work with us too, though Word handles long manuscripts and complex comments more reliably.

Before sending your file, run it through our word count checker so your quote matches the real length.

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Fiction versus nonfiction

Fiction editing leans on rhythm, dialogue and continuity. The line editor works on scene pacing and character voice, while the copy editor tracks names, timelines, the weather on a given day and which hand a character used to draw a weapon. A thriller with three timelines needs a different kind of attention than a quiet literary novel.

Nonfiction editing leans on clarity, structure inside the chapter and accuracy of the details. A line editor makes explanations easier to follow and keeps a memoir from slipping into summary when a scene would serve better. The copy editor checks headings, lists, quotes, citations and terminology.

Instructional and technical guides need extra care. Steps must appear in order, warnings must be consistent, and a term defined on page 20 has to mean the same thing on page 200. We match each project with an editor who knows the conventions of its category.

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Getting your manuscript ready for editing

A little preparation makes the edit faster and your quote more accurate. Finish the draft first. Editing a book while you are still writing the last third means the ending will not match the style decisions made earlier.

Do one read of your own, out loud if you can stand it, and fix what you already know is wrong. Remove notes to yourself, highlighted placeholders and alternate versions of scenes. Use one font, one heading style for chapters and no manual page breaks made with dozens of returns.

Then write us a short note: who the book is for, any deliberate quirks of style, words you always want spelled a certain way, and anything a previous reader flagged. If beta readers have already given feedback, tell us what you changed. That context lets the editor spend time on your prose instead of guessing at your intent.

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What line and copy editing will not do

Sentence-level editing makes a book read cleanly. It cannot fix a plot that does not hold together or an argument that never lands, and no edit can promise sales, awards or a book deal.

It also will not catch every last error. Even a careful copy edit leaves a few slips, and more creep in during layout. That is why we treat proofreading as its own pass rather than a bonus step. What you can expect is a manuscript that reads the way you meant it to, with consistent style and far fewer distractions for your readers.

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Sample edit, fixed quote and timing

Before you commit, we edit a short sample from your manuscript, usually a few pages from the middle where the writing is most typical. You see exactly what the edit looks like and whether the editor's ear suits yours.

Your fixed quote depends on word count, the condition of the draft and whether you choose a line edit, a copy edit or a combined pass. The quote states the price, the scope and the delivery date. It does not change unless you add material or change the scope.

After editing, your manuscript is ready for interior formatting and a final proofread. When you are ready, request your quote and send us a sample.

Line editing vs copy editing

Both passes work at the sentence level, but they ask different questions of your prose.

Line editing
Copy editing
Main question
Does this sentence read well and sound like you?
Is this sentence correct and consistent with the rest?
Focus
Flow, rhythm, word choice, clarity and tone
Grammar, spelling, punctuation, usage and style rules
Typical changes
Rewording, trimming, reordering sentences, sharpening dialogue
Fixing errors, hyphens, capitals, numbers and repeated terms
Your voice
Strengthened deliberately, with suggested rewrites in tracked changes
Preserved; changes are mostly mechanical and rule-based
Reference tools
Editor's ear, genre conventions and your intent
Chicago Manual of Style 18th ed. and Merriam-Webster
Extra deliverable
Editorial letter on patterns in your prose
Style sheet listing every spelling and style decision
Best timing
After structure is settled, before copy editing
After line editing, before formatting and proofreading

Why authors choose our line and copy editing

01 Your voice intactWe sharpen your sentences without rewriting you into someone else.
02 Current Chicago styleCopy edits follow the Chicago Manual of Style, 18th edition.
03 A style sheet you keepEvery decision recorded for proofreaders, formatters and future books.
04 Every change visibleTracked changes and clear margin queries, so you approve everything.
05 Genre-matched editorsFiction, memoir, business and technical books each get the right editor.
06 Fixed, honest quoteA free sample edit first, then one price that does not change.
Deliverables

What you receive

Manuscript edited in tracked changes
Clean copy with all edits accepted
Project style sheet for your book
Margin queries explaining larger changes
Editorial letter on recurring patterns
Character and timeline list for fiction
Follow-up review of your revisions

How it works

01Free consultation

Tell us about your book, your goals and where the draft stands.

02Sample edit

We edit a few pages so you can judge the approach.

03Fixed quote

You get one price, a clear scope and a firm delivery date.

04The edit

Your editor works through the manuscript line by line in Word.

05Review and queries

You accept or reject changes, and we answer every question.

06Ready for layout

Your edited file and style sheet go on to formatting and proofreading.

Line and Copy Editing FAQ

Line editing improves how your sentences read: flow, rhythm, word choice, clarity and tone. Copy editing makes them correct and consistent: grammar, spelling, punctuation, capitalization, number style and repeated terms across the whole book. A line editor asks whether a sentence works. A copy editor asks whether it follows the rules and matches every other page. Most books benefit from both, either as two passes or one combined edit.

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